changed text around Federated Science Cloud so that it fits better to the BMBF requirements text

fi-stand.tex

@@ -108,11 +108,12 @@ The Topic Group's mandate, along with the BMBF's
 goals\footnote{\url{https://www.bmbf.de/SharedDocs/Publikationen/de/bmbf/7/31640_Aktionsplan_ErUM-Data.pdf?__blob=publicationFile&v=7}}
 , is horizontal federation, i.e., making
 infrastructures of different disciplines on the national level
-interoperable and then combining them into a seamless whole.  This
-concept of a Federated Science Cloud\todo{Martin: Wo steht das im BMBF?
-Ist das nicht euer Wunsch?}, consisting of computing,
+interoperable and then combining them into a seamless whole,
+also in order to achieve scalable solutions.
+This combination of individual digital infrastructures could be seen
+as a Federated Science Cloud, consisting of computing,
 storage, and archive resources of all eight ErUM communities in Germany,
-certainly appears attractive.
+which certainly appears attractive.
 
 To establish that, a questionaire has been provided to the participating communities
 in which they were supposed to answer the following questions: